Plot plan (major project #3)

I am ready to present my work on the plot, which I have for my new script. This plan contains relatively detailed information about all the main points in the story.

 
  As you can see, here is information about the plot as well as some of my visions of how it should be implemented in a short film. The only problem is that the way I imagine a British student may differ significantly from what I think at the moment. In addition, I don't really know how to expel students from universities in England, so I rely on the experience that I know from Russia(but still it's different). Another problem may be that I can't say exactly what genre it is (some of them seem to fit, but some of them don't).

  In the rest of the same, as me seems I roughly accurately pointed out most moments and made their maximally logical, Ah at least in my anybody =)